I had a chat with an old flame recently, some of these lines came about in our conversation.
Every second
No amount of money can be wasted,
If sweet memories of you could be tasted,
No amount of time is lost,
When memories have no cost.
You are worth all I have,
Every dollar, every dime,
Every second that I can spare,
I’d spend ‘em if memories with you I got to share
One more
Just one more short coming,
One more mistake to my list.
One more stupid idea
That left my heart all crisp
One more line to add,
To all the many I’ve already had,
One more poem to say,
That all you did was made me sad.
By Ethan
2018/01/24
Note: If there are any spelling errors or things you disagree with, I would appreciate it if you let me know :)
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Did enjoy yr #Poetry !
TO say I am hyperexcited might be overstating, yet I really truly liked this #poem.
PLUS :
Looked at your Profile - I see you are Pooling funds for the future "SMT" (tokens). Will Re-steem this, as it's such a WORTHWHILE cause
lovely poem
@africaunited. I love this and I'm also a poet in the making
Can you check the last line?
"That all you did was made me sad."
I think it should be:
" All you did was what made me sad"
OR
"That all you did made me sad". Enjoyed reading.. Refreshing
Nice poem 👍🏻
That is touching. That is how I want to be with my future girlfriend/wife.
They are very reasonable lines or money, nothing changes those people who are clean of heart
the essence of all life is love
its very touching if i translate it to my languange, nice poem.
The utterances of a broken heart. Raw. Real. Graphic. Great.
@africa united nice poem! I <3 it!
actually, it's mine, I am one of the writers pooling for the project.
Excelente... Buen post. Me gusto mucho...
chequea mi post: ¿Qué sentimos? ¿Qué pensamos? ¿A que aspiramos? - Prioridades de vida.
This is full of life! Such a craft, indeed. Glad to have read it.
As someone who writes poems about me on this site, it's nice to know of your health pens
I just like the simplicity of it. A good poem.
I was touched by your poerty, especially the second one. Both were quality to read. thanks.
Seems that you are not quite over the " Old Flame"?
feelings somehow always remain...
True!
I love to read your nice poems. I'm glad if you want to see the poem I posted on my Steemit.
Nice poem :)
So excited to be part of this community and connecting with other poets and writers... thanks for sharing this! <3
good