Do you call it love too?
When it leaves you lonely and broken,
When something inside you
Dies while you still breathe?
Is this really love?
When you cross oceans and she can't cross a puddle for you
Where is the love?
When you know you are better off without her
Yet you never let go,
Do you call it love too?
When you know love is blind
But she still caught your eye?
Do you still call it love my friend?
When her promises are just smooth as her lies?
When care fades away and we are left with nothing but sadness
Would you call it love?
When you smile to hide those tears,
Is that love?
When you walk in full and walk out half.
Is it still love?
Sorry for the sad post guys just wanted to get things off my chest and breathe normal again. It just sucks when you give that someone your everything but they just toss it away like it was nothing. Writing really really helps.
Have a great day guys keep smiling
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Your poem is amazing :D
I was also wondering sometimes if why love is vague in meaning. They say when we love it must be with no reason, because if you can explain why you love a person then it's not love at all (as others say XD)
But in reality it is simple to love, it's the people who make it complicated. haha.
Anyways, your poem is great, I can feel the emotions within the words :) Have a nice day ahead
Yup it's people who make it complicated. It's very simple to love :)
Firstly. It was daring thing to share your true emotions on a social platform because not always you get shoulders to cry on. Great appreciation!!
And secondly you can always talk, if you feel like. Everything will be alright . JUST BREATHE :))
I love to write no matter what it's about, steemit is more like my journey through life. Even the deepest and saddest moments are a part of this symphony
that's great :))
Even though phases certain phases are shit, they teach you a lot right?
yeahh....indeed !!
Good to get things off your chest.
Being honest is just a starter.
Besides of that,
I will cross oceans when love inspires me.
Nevertheless, many times stuff gets in the way.
Keep in mind that it is well worth to stay in touch with far away friends.
True!