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RE: Facing the truth, no matter how big and grey it may be

in The Ink Wellyesterday

Ah, whilst the fat man politician/king/ruler/CEO gluts and stuff his pockets, the poor man suffers - a very age old story. People's habits and desires make other people suffer. It reads like a fairy tale, which is good, but one thing to try next time is to expose more backstory/character feelings instead of move from plot point to plot point. A good interpretation of the prompt!

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Thank you for the observation. I will try well next time