Oh Amnesia!

in The Ink Welllast year

“Mrs. George”, The nurse called out while scanning the reception.

“Yes Ma”, I said as I fumbled with my slippers and worked briskly to meet her.

“Good Afternoon Ma, you can now come in to see your husband”, she said giving a smile that didn’t reach her eyes.

“Nurse is everything fine?” I asked concern laced in my voice.

“Ma'am just come in”, she said sharply and led the way.

I made a silent prayer to God whilst walking with her to the ward where my husband was.

“Good morning Ma”, the doctor said his voice bringing me back to reality.

“Sir please is my husband fine?” I asked.

"Yes, he is, but we have a little complication, your husband has survived the life-threatening stage but he has lost his memory, he has Amnesia Ma”. The doctor said with his face void of all emotions.

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I gasped and covered my mouth in utter disbelief, the sound must have been so loud that it woke my husband up. I walked to his bed, raised his chin, and caressed his face. I looked at my poor husband in sympathy and that was when reality hit me.

“Who are you please and what am I doing here?”, my husband said looking at me.

My heart sank, it was more like they had stabbed me for the 100th time on my chest, a few drops of my tears dropped on my husband’s face and he cringed.

“Nurse please who is this? I don’t know her, why is she crying?” He asked staring blankly at me.

The more he said those words, the more my heart got shattered a thousand times and I wept.

“Sorry Ma you have to please leave, we cannot afford another trigger that could throw him back into coma,” the nurse said politely her eyes begging me to cooperate.

I couldn’t believe it, my husband could not recognize me nor did he want me around, I sluggishly left the ward with my heart torn apart, hot tears sliding down my cheeks, and with a splitting headache.

I sat down at the reception and all I could think of was all the good memories I had of Harry my husband before the ghastly motor accident that almost claimed his life. Harry was on his way to his father's funeral when a drunk truck driver hit him, causing the car to summersault and landing in a nearby bush.

My mind went back to how it all started, how we met each other in college, and how he popped the question at the beach, “Ohh the beach! I will never forget the event that had occurred back then”.

I remember the event clearly like yesterday, Harry sure outdid himself that day, he had planned everything right before we embarked on the journey, and he had involved some of my family members and a few of my friends, I got the shock of my life when I saw all of them pop out of nowhere, it was so cute and nice.
I used to believe that most surprises were staged until that day when I cried my eyes out. My sick father could make it down to Malibu!!, Harry paid for all their flight tickets and made provision for their accommodations as well.

It all started with him deciding he wanted us to go on a vacation for my birthday celebration, I squealed in excitement as it had been ages since I had been to the beach. We made all the necessary arrangements and headed to Malibu and went straight to the beach house and oh boy the sight of the beach was spectacular.

On our second day at the beach, it happened!! The day my status changed from single to engaged.

It was a cool evening, I got dressed in the beautiful beach dress that I had gotten from Louisa’s couture and my hair was packed in a messy bun, I applied a little makeup and I wore my favorite pair of earrings that Harry had gotten for me. I looked super nice that day, it was like the universe had whispered to me that something great was coming my way that day and I had to dress my best.

Hand in hand we walked together, letting the wind blow away all our troubles and fill our bodies with nothing but joy and excitement. We swung our hands in unison with our steps, I was feeling all giddy that day as it was my birthday and the atmosphere was just perfect.

While walking with Harry we got to a point where his wristwatch had mistakenly fallen down and he had to search for it amidst the sand, not having the patience to wait, I left him to take some cool pictures and that was when the magic began.

I looked up and all I could see were fireworks and in a split second I saw candles everywhere, just like the perfect scene of a romcom, the one that gives you butterflies in your stomach and just when I turned around to gush about the magical moments to Harry I saw homeboy on his knees and a ring in his hand and as if it wasn't enough, my family, his family and our friends started popping out of everywhere bearing gifts and singing my favourite song Perfect, lost in the moment I started crying like a teenage girl, I couldn't hold it anymore as I ran down to Harry, I said yes and threw myself right in his arms, I didn't take note of what our spectators where doing, in that moment Harry was all that mattered to me.

I couldn't help but shed more tears as I remembered the memories of the beach and the fact that the love of my life was lying down in the next room with no memories of me.
Just like the Doctor said, it might take a little while for him to regain his memory but chances that he would finally regain it was really high.

I slumped back in the chair and all I could do was pray that my partner would be fine again.

Image is mine except otherwise stated.

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Eyaaaah!
Emotional one again 😄.

That feeling is painful though, especially when the chances of him coming back to his real self is below 50%.
It's well

It is indeed well dearest Kingsley😃

'dearest'
🙈🙈

I'm so emotional reading now. Although it's all fiction but I felt the pain she felt learning that her husband has amnesia.
You wrote well

Not remembering a thing about the most important person in your life can be so tragic.

Thanks for stopping by dear friend.

Such an emotional read, she would have to rekindle all that they did and shared together. This is back to square 1 for him and it's going to be a really though journey for her.

Oh what a heartbreaking story! Loss of memory is incredibly difficult to bear in loved ones. The challenge of the tragedy stretches and strains through the lives of all who play the part of carers, including medical professionals, who have to balance patient needs with that of the family. This turn of phrase was excellent: "a smile that didn’t reach her eyes." It captured the emotion and sentiment perfectly. The first half of this piece struck a lovely balance between narrative, action, and dialogue. If the same balance had been maintained throughout, this would have been a knockout piece. It slid into straight narrative as your MC reminisced. It would have been lovely if you had shown more of that day at the beach through the use of recalled dialogue too. Watch out for your punctuation in longer sentences. One of your paragraphs was one long sentence. It's important to separate thoughts with periods. If I may, allow me to re-punctuate just half of it for you and make a few tweaks, as an example of how you could have written it to improve readability and flow...

'I looked up and all I could see were fireworks. In a split second I saw candles everywhere, just like the perfect scene of a romcom; the one that gives you butterflies in your stomach. When I turned around to gush about the magical moments to Harry, I saw homeboy on his knees with a ring in his hand.'

Thank you for writing in The Ink Well. You really do have a lovely style that is enjoyable to read.

Awwww thank you so much @theinkwell this has to be the nicest comment I have ever gotten from this community and to think that I woke up to see this🥰🥰

I'll try to incorporate everything you have stated subsequently.

Thankkkkkkk you!!!🥳🥳

Oh wow, the emotions running throughout the story.

This is beautiful! It reads Romance but very disappointed not getting revived. I really loved all of the vivid description, imagery, and wonderful plot, yeah even though it was so sad and emotional. The grammar seems perfect the way it is, and it add more dept to the story too.

Thanks for sharing dear Ibb.

Thank you dearest Seun for your kind words🥰🥰

So touching:
We do not remember days but we remember moments......

Absolutely true dear friend!

Que dolor tan fuerte es olvidar poco a poco esos detalles que forman un conjunto de sentimientos en nuestro ser. Saludos

Emotional

Nothing is lost forever, it may take a while but he will surely regain his memory

What a lovely dovey piece of fiction. I loved what you did with the prompt, I could already image the day at the beach🥺.

Okay okay, snap out of it wongi😂

This was a lovely read IB✨

LOl ohhhh this girl😂😂

Thank you dearest Wongi, you rock!🤗🤗

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This is so touching, I can't even imagine my partner saying those words to me, I can lose it as well, amnesia is one of life's miseries, hmmm

I also can't, may such never happen to any of us, Amen!

I pray this never happens to any one if us in reality. Losing once memory could be very challenging for the care giver and family members. We pray for a speedy recovery for the man you write about. Weldone

I pray that it never happens to anyone too and thanks for taking the time to read😃