I really like your entry. But doesn't the last line have 6 syllables instead of 5? I apologize if I'm in error - new to this and trying to make sure I understand.
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I really like your entry. But doesn't the last line have 6 syllables instead of 5? I apologize if I'm in error - new to this and trying to make sure I understand.
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you're right.
It's six syllables. I didn't notice until now
Thanks for pointing that out
Congratulations on winning! It is a beautiful haiku!
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