Haiku by Matsuo Bashō (1644-1694)
The poetry contest of Bananafish!
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For those that want to unleash their poetic potential, here is how this contest works:
• Look at the prompt image and let yourself be inspired by it.
• Write a haiku related to the prompt image. The haiku should be composed by 3 verses with no title. The 1st verse should be 5 syllables long, the 2nd verse should be 7 syllables long, and the 3rd verse should be 5 syllables long again.
• If you aren’t confident with English enough, you can write your haiku in Spanish, French, or Italian as well. Only remember, if you write in languages different from English, please include an English translation for other readers.
• Post the haiku on your blog or in the comment section below this post. If you make your own post, don’t forget to put the link to it in the comment section below!
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Prompt Image:
• Kireji (切れ字), a cut between the 1st and the 2nd verses, or between the 2nd and the 3rd; the cut can be grammatical, as a sign of punctuation, or it can be a cut in the meaning, like two different images.
• Kigo (季語), an explicit or implicit reference to a season, that defines the time of the year in which the haiku is composed or referred to.
• Sabi (寂), the sense of the inexorable passage of time, the beauty or serenity that accompanies the advance of age, when the life of the objects and its impermanence are highlighted by patina and wear or by any visible repairs.
• Wabi (侘寂), the taste for frugal and natural things, rustic simplicity, freshness or silence; it can be applied to both natural and artificial objects, or even non-ostentatious elegance.
• Mono no aware (物の哀れ), empathy with nature and human life; the "feeling of things", nostalgia, regret for the passing of time, understanding of the changeability and of the transience without suffering.
• Yūgen (幽玄), sense of wonder and mystery; it represents the state of mind produced by the inexplicable fascination of things, the feeling of an 'other' universe, full of mysterious unity.
• Karumi (軽み), beauty in simplicity; poetic beauty reflected in its simplicity, free from preconceptions and moral judgment.
• Shiori (しおり), gentleness; the levity and the delicate charm that radiates from the verses, where things are evoked in the reader without aggressiveness or excessive explicitness.
Submission deadline: Wednesday 24h October, 11:59 PM, GMT -7 (Pacific Daylight Time).
The results will be out on Thursday 25th October, 1:00 PM, GMT -7 (Pacific Daylight Time).
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Autumn leaves fall to
Forest floor, crunching under
Foot. A path ahead.
Interesting structure of the verses (f3n)
Thank you for another beautiful picture, another opportunity to reflect. My haiku:
Birch silent witness
To house hewn from severed trees.
Fall descends on all
You're welcome. I'm glad you like my shot.. that's an enchanted forest.. especially in this season. Your haiku has a very pleasant halo of Yugen.
Thank you. Yeah, you guys come up with some great shots.
A vein of bitter irony... nice!
(Marco)
Thank you. It did strike me as ironic, and sad, that they had to kill trees to make way for people to come and see the trees.
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I hope nothing was lost in translation.My Vote is for @oscarina. I really loved this Haiku.
Mi voto es para @blueeyes8960. Considero que su ejercicio, además de cumplir con los aspectos formales del haiku, según entiendo, alcanza en su lenguaje, particularmente en sus imágenes, una sensible y sencilla belleza. así como un sentido de meditación sobre el tiempo y su paso.
Me gusta mucho el haiku de @oscarina. Le doy mi voto.
My vote goes to @oscarina.
Here be me entry for this contest.
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Thanks again. Here's my entry:
https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@cyemela/mizu-no-oto-haiku-contest-week-06-bananafish
Hi, I'm a new member and this is my first time to participate in your contest. I have become enamored of the beauty of haiku poetry. Here is my entry:
https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@blueeyes8960/haiku-contest-for-banafish
Welcome to the contest! Once you start to understand the beauty in its simplicity, that sparkle of intuition, you fall in love 😉 If you feel more curious about us, you may join us in our Bananafish Realms discord chat or in our Finish the Story contest.
Hola, compañeros, esta es mi entrada de esta semana.
Suerte a todos los participantes.
https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@oacevedo/mizu-no-oto-every-image-has-its-haiku-contest-week-6
Amigos de @bananafish, y demás participantes en este reto siempre tan atractivo, aquí les dejo mi participación. Deseo los mejores resultados para todos.
https://steemit.com/haikucontenst/@josemalavem/mizu-no-oto-every-image-has-its-haiku-contest-week-6
I wish success for all the contestants.Hello @bananafish my entry https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@felixgarciap/in-the-shade-of-trees-haiku-contest-week-6-83f1694b5867best
Hi Felix, it's always great to see you ;-)
Happy day friend @bananafish
Participando por vez primera en esta iniciativa de @bananafish y agradeciendo la oportunidad de poner en practica la creatividad y la escritura con este hermoso tipo de poema japonés... https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@oscarina/tesoro-sagrado-every-image-has-its-haiku-contest-week-6
Bienvenida @oscarina!
Thank you very much @bananafish
hi @bananafish here's my entry!
https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@louielowa/my-entry-to-mizu-no-oto-haiku-contest-week-6
Hi Louie, welcome to the Bananafish Realms!
thanks a lot!!!
Hola acá está mi haiku https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@javert68justice/mizu-no-oto-cada-imagen-tiene-su-concurso-semana-6
Thanks for another chance to win some stuff in a fun way.
Here is My Entry Post
Abandon come down
where the sacred calm trees rest
inside the cabin
https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@iamthegray/mizu-no-oto-every-image-has-its-haiku-contest-week-6-a414f4e5c188a
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I really like your entry. But doesn't the last line have 6 syllables instead of 5? I apologize if I'm in error - new to this and trying to make sure I understand.
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you're right.
It's six syllables. I didn't notice until now
Thanks for pointing that out
Congratulations on winning! It is a beautiful haiku!
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Hello, @bananafish, here's my entry:
https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@aurodivys/mizu-no-oto-cada-imagen-tiene-su-concurso-haiku-semana-6
Me gustó tu ejercicio, @aurodivys. Logras una composición de sencilla belleza y serenidad. ¡Suerte!
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