si estás haciendo las cosas correctas'...
Es lo que me dijo ella.
convirtiéndose en un hilo blanco,
que no dura lo suficiente para honrarlo.
luego otra,
una tercera.
me ofrece uno, pero lo rechazo.
Se ríe de mi inocencia.
pregunta sonriendo.
'Eso mata', respondo.
'y no por eso los rechazas',
concluye con una sonrisa.
ella me admira,
y sonríe.
las personas se van,
y el cuerpo se desgasta.'
el odio triunfa,
y las personas se cansan.'
'¿Me rechazas un cigarro?'
Guiña el ojo.
jala un poco y lo suelta,
'fuman para sentirse vivos, cariño.'
Posted from my blog with SteemPress : https://pedrojesuss.timeets.com/index.php/2018/10/26/un-cigarrillo-relato-poetico/
Me encanto hermano!!, sigue así
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