Liquid Love; A Fictional Story

in #steemitmamas6 years ago

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She looked around as she stepped into the water. The Moon glistened on the surface as the crickets sang their rhythmic call to mate. It was a still night, the house on the cliff dark, they were all fast asleep. As she walked further, deeper, she shed her clothes. Naked, she slipped into the water and all that was left were her clothes floating, as the waves gently pushed them back to shore.

"Ferns, come on!! Wake up!! It's your birthday!!", her little sister came running in.

"No silly!! It's the eve of my birthday. And knock! Knock the door!" she said laughing. Fern caught her sister and dragged her into bed and started tickling her. This happened almost every single morning.

"So Sage... tell me. What do you do, before you come into my room?"

"I knock", and she knocked on the bed frame. "Then I wait for you to say - Come in! and then I come in", she giggled.

Fern loved her 5 year old sister. Her mum had her 13 years after her. Mum started acting strange from the time she got pregnant with Sage. Talking to herself, sometimes walking off to the lake and coming back soaking wet. Dad, had a tough time trying to keep up. Fern had caught them sometimes, Mum would be crying, Dad would be holding her, talking to her softly.

One day Mum disappeared. Some said she drowned herself. Others said she just ran away because she didn't want to raise another baby. Fern couldn't understand such flippant remarks, but she didn't let it bother her. She protected her sister from the gossip, and raised her like she was her own.

Dad became very quiet. He was naturally an introvert, and buried himself in work, making an appearance as and when duty called. Fern didn't let anything get her down though. She was naturally a happy person, and made sure Sage didn't miss the mother or father figure in her life.

That night, dinner with Dad and Sage was light hearted as usual. Sage talked non-stop about how she'd want her 18th birthday party with pink balloons and unicorns. Dad was always present when he was with them and played along, listening intently but she knew once dinner was over, he'd disappear into his study.

However this time, after dinner, he hung around saying he was going to have a glass of wine with his grown up daughter. Sage begged to stay awake but eventually went to bed yawning. After the good nights, Fern sat at the patio as her father poured her a drink.

They could see the lake from the balcony and it was a beautiful view. She could tell her Dad had something to say and she waited patiently. These moments spent with Dad were rare and she cherished them. After a little small talk, Dad sat in the chair opposite her. She knew this was it. It must be some grown up talk since she was turning 18.

"Fern, my dear, sweet daughter."

"Yes Dad, my wonderful, amazing father", she laughed. He seemed a little hesitant and that immedietly made the moment sober. "Dad, what is it?"

"With you turning 18, I need to talk to you about something. I need to prepare you for what's coming. It could happen at the stroke of midnight, it could happen five years from now, I don't know. I don't even know if it is true but I don't want it to catch you unaware. This happened to your mother and with her post-partum blues, she wasn't able to cope."

"Dad, you are scaring me."

"No, there's nothing to be scared of. I probably could have done more, but I didn't know how to help. There are many things I wish I could have done differently. But today it is about you."

"Dad, what is it?"

Dad took a deep breath. He held out his hand and she took it. It almost seemed like he needed the support more than she did. She waited while he gathered his words, almost unsure where to start. And finally he told her everything. She had so many mixed emotions, it was like she was in some Hans Christian Anderson story.

Fern's mother was of the lake. Born and raised in a land under the deep waters. Her parents had met when her father had bought the land by the lake and built his home there. He had spent all his life researching the space time continuum, never really engaging with people, preferring his own company, until he met Sweena.

She was beautiful, with a laugh that tinkled like tinsel and eyes that twinkled like the stars. Over time, they had fallen madly in love. When her family found out, they did everything in their power to stop her. It was unheard of and they had no conclusion what would happen if people of land and people of water united. But Sweena, went ahead anyways and walked away from the life she knew.

Life was amazing, and even though Sweena missed her family and the water, she had made peace with her choice. They were overjoyed with their first born through the complications. But it was decided they wouldn't have another. But when Sweena got pregnant again, there was no question she was going to keep the baby.

The 9 months turned out to be far more complicated then the first. Sweena, would disappear into the night, coming back in the mornings soaking wet. She was depressed and had nightmares. When she was awake, she had hallucinations. She said people from the water were following her. They wanted her to come back. And no matter how much her dear husband tried to comfort her, the madness continued even after the delivery. Two months after Sage's birth, her mother walked into the lake and never came back.

When Fern was involved in an accident, and was hospitalised for over a month, the medication kicked off hallucinations of the water people watching over her. It scared her at first, but over time, she realised they were just her guides. There to protect her.

When she was discharged and went home, every night she'd hear the calling. Whispers in the wind, teasing, inviting. She tried fighting at first, and finally surrendered. That night, she waited till everyone was asleep, then walked to the waters edge, As she stepped in, she felt an immeasurable sense of calm, and infinity of love. She was home.

That was almost 7 years ago. Sage was turning 16 in a couple of weeks. Fern was sure, without doubt that Sage would get the calling. When, she wasn't sure but she had to tell her. To prepare her, just like her Dad did all those years ago.

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Thank you sooo much... I have the biggest smile on my face 😊 (way bigger than that)

I've been in a scary conversation on the eve of a birthday before and I know how that feels. Poor girl, hope she gets to choose a home that'll put her mind to rest.


Maybe she doesn't need to choose
Maybe she can have them both 😊I hope that scary conversation ironed itself out @awesomeabasiono

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Greets @kaerpediem !

I would like to say to you, that you have written a magnificent Fictional Story !

Very lovely and good to read, just keep on writing dear.

See you around later in steemitbloggers ;-) I also dropped a little by.

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And the encouragement
I truly appreciate it 😊Thank you @avizor for dropping in and reading and commenting

I so was not ready for the story to end. Maybe their mother is living in the lake with her people. Wonder if the girls will meet with that side of their family. They could have grand adventures if they ever did.

It can be any of it, all of it, more of it 😊

Means a lot Thank you so much for the support @headchange

Thanks for the reply. You left so much room to flesh this one out. Do you think you will ever turn it into a longer work? I can see a whole series of books, but then again I am an avid reader lol. I will try to remember to scroll through your blog on my next reading day. Interested to see what else you post.

I have never given it much thought ....
I got into FreeWrite by accident, just kind of floundering, finding my footing, unsure where and what to do here on Steemit
Then I joined a 50 day challenge, to try and get into the habit of writing every day
And then I fell in love with the whole idea of creating these little stories
But with this comment and few others, I have thoughts and ideas rolling around in my head now.
I do appreciate the encouragement... Thank you so much 😊

That must have been a really good challenge you are not the first to mention it to me. I am doing that now floundering around searching for my place here.
I am much more of a reader but need to write for the growth of my account. I am considering putting up some stories. Honestly I love that the platform offers the opportunity to experiment with so many things.
Looks like you have found your calling.

You will find something
Just something about the steemians (the ones I have come across anyways)
And I hear the @freewritehouse and @mariannewest (custodian of the 5 minute freewrite) might have something in November if you would like to check it out 😊

I just feel like this story should continue somehow... It is a really incredible story.

It was so great of Fern to be able to take care of her sister, Sage when their Mum left for her "home", maybe the girls will go back there someday? The Dad will be really shattered when that happens.

Its is just sad though that the Dad didn't get to have his long for longer. I bet he will give everything just to have her back...

I enjoyed every bit of your story..

I am so very happy you liked this story
It is very encouraging, and gives me ideas
Thank you so much 😊

It is an amazing story, and I had no other option than to like it. #smiles. I am glad it gave you more ideas!

My pleasure!

awesome!!! You got a curie vote!! so happy for you!!

Thank you so much
You know you are a big part of this FreeWrite Journey of mine 😊 ❤️

That was pretty cool, now if I was the genius father, I would be trying to figure out the people of the water a bit more. Or I would be working on that time machine, to go find my wife.
Take care of little sis, Fern was a rather well developed character for a short free write, and even put off that motherly vibe that many older siblings get.

I think you might have figured out why he is always in his room... haha
I didn't give that siblings relationship much thought but hey, you are right...
Thank you, I do like reading your comments 😊

That's one of the beauties of free-writes you will sometimes, hit upon an element or character that you don't even have to think about. It may be just tapping into your idea of an older sister.

@kaerpediem! Keep it up! You have mine and the @steemitmamas community support to cross your 500 SP! We are excited for you!


The shoulder to cry on
The hand to hold
The ear to listen
You are the best!!
Thank you 😊This is why I love you Head Mama n @steemitmamas

This story is super beautifully written. I love reading it so much, you are such a great fiction writer, @kaerpediem! Congratulations on the curie upvote, so deserve it!


Gives me great pleasure to know you enjoyed reading it 😊Thank you @happycrazycon

Selamat! Curied yay 💃💃💃💃

You deserved my sweet 🤗😍🤗😍


Thank you so much
Fingers crossed we get to see you when you come to this side of the world 😊Awwww @thekitchenfairy

Ooh such an interesting spin on the little mermaid. Bittersweet is definitely what you do best!

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Bittersweet.. I like that 😊
Thank you @Vincy, thank you so much

Such a beautiful story my friend, well written 😊
Gives a good feeling reading this and made me smile. Congrats on the curie vote hey 😉👍
It's well deserved!
Happy Tuesday my friend. Cheers! 🌼🌻

Makes me so happy that you liked the story
Thank you so much @saffisara 😊