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RE: Constructing the Invisible [@v4vapid Psy-Op Conspiracy Contest short story]

in #psyop-contest7 years ago

Rereading this and I enjoy how well the dialog and beats flow @negativer. Some great lines as well:

If they can’t hold it in their hands or eat it or screw it, it has no value.

He stared at me like I had bananas growing out of my ears.

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Excellent. I appreciate the comments @cizzo. Thanks for reading!