Postcard Poem 2

in #poetry5 years ago

Although I just recently discovered it, postcard poetry has been around for a while. Here is the second one I submitted to Rattle Magazine. I made it from scratch. Unfortunately it wasn't accepted for publication in the magazine.

14/02/2019

It's raining and I've a feeling
it'll rain until the day
I can finally make peace
with the sun casting my shadow
on these cold and empty walls.

But for now, like my tears
guide the rain, your heart
guides my hand.

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That is extraordinarily beautiful! I love that genre "postcard poems" - I love short poems. I know they are difficult to write. This one of yours has given me goosebumps.

What a bummer today will be! I can't seem to upvote, comment on, or resteem this lovely poem!!!

I love this

I've been trying to upvote this and comment on it all day. I still can't upvote it, but I want you to know that I adore this little thing, it says so much without saying much at all. The best.

So how does this work? You send a postcard with your poem on it to that address? I have a bunch of very short poems

Alrighty I guess five comments is enough! lol. I thought they weren't taking, but apparently they were.