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RE: [On Butterfly Wings] Thirty Day Haiku and Digital Art @brokemancode

in #poetry7 years ago

Congratulations on Day #30!

<p dir="auto">I really love the line <code>in the wind, memories fly -- how it stands alone and also combines with line 3. But as a standalone line, it evokes all kinds of imagery... <ul> <li>Reminiscing <li>Letting go <li>Sudden, forced focus...like the "shit hits the fan" and all the silly distractions fall away and you focus on what matters <p dir="auto">Thanks! 😊
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That does sound nice:) Thank you, fremen:)