Why is it so easy falling for you?
I could remember, it's simple to do.
You always reminded me of something,
Maybe the song that the angels would sing.
Then again, maybe it was just your light,
I can close my eyes, but it's still so bright.
Maybe it's your hot burning conviction,
Or the words you say, maybe your diction.
There's always the obvious pure kindness,
But you won't be used, never were mindless.
Perhaps it's just compatibility,
Did we come from the same reality?
It really doesn't matter in the end,
We were always meant to cross paths again.
nice
Quality short poem! Im very interested in the proper presentation of poems, how can steemit be used to post poetry in the right way so it is valued?
I pretty much always post mine just like this. Sometimes my formatting is a little different, but after a while I found people that read my poetry. :)
Keep it up, its a beautiful art.
Beautiful as always :)
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A light to my rathersomber morning. And, Just in time,when I roll around questioning, typing, asking to myself what is love?
I'll take this as " what's love?" and I regret to put this on speaker.
I think everything is love.
excellent poem @clayboyn I love the way you wrote these verses, very moving, thank you for sharing your work, I would appreciate if you giving her a look at my last post and leave me your comment, greetings and success in everything!
very touching and simple. sweet :)
Beautiful as always
Beautiful 💜 You are such a creative wonderful genius and inspiration 💞
Beautiful with a powerful ending. Can feel your conviction :)
Thanks homey!
"You always reminded me of something,
Maybe the song that the angels would sing."
This phrase really captured a feeling for me. Fantastic writing, once again. :)
It's funny because I rarely use religious imagery, but that came to mind and stuck.