Drivin

in #poem7 years ago

Of all the people that I know... I know myself the least

I try to take control of the world but yet I cannot tame the beast

Of all the things that I've ever felt, I feel that I'm incomplete

and in a world made of division I am drivin' to compete

drivin' by wants, drivin by desire.... drivin by the things you want when you retire

drivin' by hopes, drivin' by dreams..... drivin' by the ends no matter what the means

drivin' by love, or drivin by hate........ drivin by those things that bring about your fate

drivin' by religion, or drivin' by spirit..... drivin' by things just because you fear it

Everyone is drivin' by something....so what is driving you? Driver decides the destination ....so where are you drivin' too???

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