The cover drew me in, the song was kickass....groovy beat...and definitely was sucked in with a mind trip.
Your intro didn't do it for me {Lucky for you I scrolled down}....cause you end was epic !! ..and very witty......um...I'd suggest deleting the top....
Thank you for your advice! This has been edited. Awesome when people actually take time to help out! You have been up-voted!
You're more than welcome Steemit friend :)