Concurso de Microrrelatos de Terror #MicroTerror256 - Semana 10 - Tras la ventana: Alberto y Lorena

in #microterror2566 years ago (edited)
Hola, queridos amigos. Después de un tiempo ausente, he querido participar de nuevo en este concurso que me encanta. A continuación les rntrego mi relato. Espero os guste.

Alberto y Lorena


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Aquella noche, Alberto recordaba a Lorena, quien había muerto meses atrás por su marido celoso. Alberto pudo escapar esa mañana de su ira; al sentir la llegada de su vehículo. Corrió con los pantalones sin ajustar por la puerta trasera. Y corrió aun más por los patios traseros cuando escucho dos disparos seguidos.

Ya eran las 2 am cuando Alberto vio un resplandor anaranjado que provenía de la ventana. Su cuerpo se levanto de la cama, ligero como pluma de canario y se movio hasta la ventana. Afuera vio a Lorena desnuda, acercándose grácil hacia él, susurrando palabras ininteligibles. Alberto atravesó la ventana casi rozando el dintel para acercarse a Lorena, como encantado por el canto de una sirena.

Frente a ella, Alberto contempla su tez radiante y la mirada extraviada. Él la tomó entre sus brazos y ella le rodea con los suyos la cintura. La besó ardientemente, sintiendo en un momento que de un tirón, le desprende un hilo plateado que tenia en la espalda, adherido como cola de ratón . Alberto sintió en un instante, todo un carrusel de recuerdos a la velocidad del rayo, siendo llevado del brazo de Lorena por un tragaluz al final de un laberinto ascendente.

Nadie pudo entender cómo él amaneció una mañana muerto con una sonrisa en los labios., siendo tan joven y saludable.

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Bueno, Alberto se tenía que llevar su parte. Escalofriante, @yaleal; pude escuchar la música de la brisa que silvaba en el fondo :D

Hola @marlyncabrera. La brisa se llevó todos los errores de Alberto en su silbido ;). Gracias por leer mi breve cuento en mi regreso por estos terroríficos predios.

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