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RE: "FOOL FOR LOVE - AN ORIGINAL SONG || BY D4MUSIC @obaro" [ENG-ESP]

in Music • 2 years ago

This song is about heartbreak, I liked some of the melismas that you added, you can feel the message of pain that you want to transmit, I would only recommend you not to have so many repetitions at the end.

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    This song is about heartbreak, I liked some of the melismas that you added, you can feel the message of pain that you want to transmit,

    Yes you are right!!
    The song is a song of heart break!
    And I'm glad you liked it!!🙂

    I would only recommend you not to have so many repetitions at the end.

    How do you mean by repetition?
    Do you mean chorus can't be repeated?
    I cleared indicated that side as chorus which is

    Am I a fool for love (4x)

    I listen to songs very well.. and I'm sure you do too.
    Song choruses are repeated well enough two to thrice in a song.

    It's only the lyrics that might not be permitted to be repeated!!

    Thanks for the observation dear @eugelys !!

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      I listen to songs very well.. and I'm sure you do too.
      Song choruses are repeated well enough two to thrice in a song.

      Yes, of course, I listen to songs very well in fact I have been listening to songs in many languages for over 40 years (lol). Your song could have ended at minute 04:09 where you just pause which conveyed that to me, then the chorus starts again for 30 more seconds. These are just suggestions Obaro, my opinion, my contribution :)

      Have a nice day!

      Sí claro que escucho las canciones muy bien de hecho llevó más de 40 años escuchando canciones en muchos idiomas (lol). Tu canción pudo haber terminado en el minuto 04:09 donde justamente haces una pausa que me transmitió eso, luego empieza el coro nuevamente por 30 segundos más. Son solo sugerencias Obaro, mi opinión, mi aporte :) ¡Ten un bello día!

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        Yes, of course, I listen to songs very well in fact I have been listening to songs in many languages for over 40 years (lol). Your song could have ended at minute 04:09 where you just pause which conveyed that to me, then the chorus starts again for 30 more seconds. These are just suggestions Obaro, my opinion, my contribution :)

        You must be a musical genius I must say!!

        It's nice having you around visiting my content.

        Thanks for your observation. I like what you do dear @eugelys

        Btw, I like how you sing too!!❤️

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          You must be a musical genius I must say!!

          You exaggerate a lot (lol) A musical genius is Mozart, for example, among many others. I was just telling you that I have more than 40 years of listening to songs of all kinds, in several languages, since we are born we all listen to music and we form our musical ear according to what we hear. Then we grow up in our childhood, adolescence, and adulthood we continue in that process. I am very observant of the musical world, not a genius (not at all). If you are in your twenties you have at least 20 years of listening to music, it doesn't make us musical geniuses, just music lovers who listen to music not only with their ears but also with their hearts.

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            You exaggerate a lot (lol) A musical genius is Mozart, for example, among many others. I was just telling you that I have more than 40 years of listening to songs of all kinds, in several languages, since we are born we all listen to music and we form our musical ear according to what we hear. Then we grow up in our childhood, adolescence, and adulthood we continue in that process. I am very observant of the musical world, not a genius (not at all). If you are in your twenties you have at least 20 years of listening to music, it doesn't make us musical geniuses, just music lovers who listen to music not only with their ears but also with their hearts.

            This is true.
            But I'm not exaggerating about you being a musical genius!! Hahaha 😀
            I appreciate great things when I see one.

            However, the heart understands music so well. When we connect with our hearts while writing a song, it tends to be great!.

            Btw, are you on telegram?
            Or discord?

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              You keep exaggerating (OMG), yes I am on Discord. It would be nice if some of us singer-songwriters could get together to talk about how we create songs. Maybe the language barrier might be a bit of a problem but maybe we can make it happen.

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                Smiles you are funny.

                It would be nice if some of us singer-songwriters could get together to talk about how we create songs. Maybe the language barrier might be a bit of a problem but maybe we can make it happen.

                It will be nice to make that happen!

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