May I be a bit of a nitpicker?

Always, please! It really helps me grow when I receive feedback 💚

My idea was that the "water" and general atmosphere intoxicate the diners, so many leave in a euphoric state. Perhaps this is to cloak the location, or maybe Will-o-wisps are just mischievous like that hehe

Looking over it now, I wrote that bit kinda dodgy !LOLZ

Thank you so much for this fantastic comment, I'm really glad you liked it!! And thank you again for asking that question, it helped me to see something that needed to be cleaned up if I were to submit this to a publisher. 🤗

!LUV !PIZZA