This story reads like poetry in some places, because the language is symbolic and evocative.

with her bright sky colored eyes but soft,
I'll tell you the sun is good like a beach, apart the white sky and soft as a sponge,

The story is subtle, and beautiful, though there is some confusion in the narrative, mostly due probably to translation issues.

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