Desperation doesn't produce healthy fruits.
Winnie should have learned from her friend's mistakes in the past concerning Harry.
I do hope Winnie comes out of the mess Harry put her in unscathed.
The dialogue and time change in your story is really good.
Yeah, Winnie should have listened to her friend's advice. It would have prevented her from making such a costly mistake. Thanks for visiting for the comments ☺️.
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