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With a small wooden stick in his right hand, Louis rattles all the metallic objects he finds as he runs through the streets, on his race from his house to the square. The clanging fills his childish soul. The crude chimes give him a hodgepodge of feelings, a mischievous joy with a form of delightful enjoyment he cannot yet identify. From time to time he stops and with his improvised drumstick he resonates some lamp post, tapping at different heights.

A broad smile, very white in high contrast to his skin tone, seems carved on his face. The people in the neighborhood watch him pass by and smile too. Perhaps they are infected by the tender image: a child who fills the street with metallic tinkles. Maybe they are remembering their own childhood: the inner child smiling bursts out, seeing a child smiling.

Louis is seven years old, running towards the square. It is the time when the workers and employees return from work. Just the right time when, with his street act, he can pick up a few coins to take home. Through his worn-out shoes he can feel the warmth of the asphalt. There is only one more street to go to meet his three friends. There they are. It is Friday.

The stage is set. Four wooden crates lift the four little bodies off the floor. An old hat is used to collect the tips. They sing children's rounds.

"Three blind mice,
Three blind mice,
Look how they run,
Look how they run..."

They sing in chorus, but they also use the canon technique: one voice is delayed each time and enters, with the same lyrics and the same melody in a different time than the other singers. The white voices produce a white effect on the crowds in the square. For the hurried passers-by it is worth standing there, mesmerized, listening to four little children sing with such dexterity.

The children have done it many times. Louis knows the effect he produces when he has finished singing his verse and pronounces words that do not exist, lexicons that he invents each time he sings. Those present laugh at the witticism and then have the impulse to leave more coins in the old hat.

Watching them toss coins Louis lets out his mischievous, wide, white-hot smile. His eyes are distracted from watching the hat and rise above the silhouettes of the spectators to see the green canopy of the trees. From the green of the trees his gaze rises to the bewitching blue of the sky and gets lost in the shapes of the white clouds. As she plays with the clouds her throat continues to accompany the chant that repeats, to infinity, in the chorus.

When all the passers-by have made sure they have heard the entire repertoire and continue on their way, the children descend from their improvised platform. It is time to count coins: the serious game of counting the winnings.

"One for you." "Another one for you. "One for you." "This one for me." It's not Louis the counting child. He listens to the jingle of the coins and admires how they fly from the counting boy's hands to land near everyone's pile. Louis has his pile between his legs. He pulls out beads as he imagines the look on Mom's face when he hands them to her.

Mom embraces him, first with astonishment, then her gaze becomes tinged with the varnish of sadness. She looks at him, seeming to suffer for not being sure which path awaits this son who does not seem to be affected by poverty, a fiercer poverty since her husband abandoned the family.

She thinks that, although it was only recently that she heard him cry in the cradle, "He will learn things unimaginable to me, good things," she consoles herself. Looking at the joyful face of her little boy, her heart quiets as if she feels a soft, minty breeze, as if blown by a nearby muse.

Later, as the night grows darker, sacredly dark, Louis lies on his bed and reminisces about the day. The songs he has sung in the street come back to lull him to sleep. Before sleep overcomes him, looking at the lights outside, he imagines himself climbing onto a fully lit stage. He imagines himself surrounded by musicians, friends whom he embraces. He knows that with each hug he wants to say "I love you". As a child Louis knows that the world is wonderful. Life opens up before the sleeping child.

The next morning he will remember that he dreamed he was an adult and that a golden trumpet was shining in his hands.


Thank you for reading

@gracielaacevedo

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A gentle arc, with the conflict, little understood by the child, one of existential significance. He deals with life as it has been given to him. His mother understands poverty in an an objective sense. Food, clothing, shelter. He understands it in terms of love, and coins collected. His only frame of reference is the world he has grown up in. To him it is not conflict. It is a problem solved with music in the streets.

We meet your child with the open heart he brings to the street. We leave not in despair, but in the hope he holds in his heart.

Great story.

Thanks for reading, @theinkwell! I have given in my story the first name of an artist, one of the greatest musicians mankind has ever heard. The soft confllic that the written story presents is nested to an immense social conflict that was lived in the times when Louis ran through the streets to sing in the square. How Louis softened such dramatic times with his immense smile!
Thanks always for the inspiration, @theinkwell.

That’s a pretty rare talent that you have there - how is it possible for you to write a story about extreme poverty and fill it with magic and hope. Fabulously done and beautifully written. ❤️🤗💕🤗🤗❤️

Thanks for the generous comment, @itsostylish! I thought of this story for The Ink Well challenge last week. I chose to place Magical Realism within a literary genre that contains it in spades, that of Historical Fiction. All the magic and hope in the world is found in the characters of the story. Louis existed, at the age of seven he was singing in the streets. It was far more exuberant, as beautiful, magical and hopeful than I could ever describe it.

I think that I’m honored to read such exceptional prose. Please keep it up, it’s such a joy! ❤️🤗💕🤗🤗❤️❤️☺️😘😘😊😊😐😊😘💕🤗🤗❤️💗💗💗💗💗💗💗

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This story is rich and I lack the words to describe it. The innocence of Louis is the tool he has to navigate through life. I see a child that cherishes every bit of their existence with wild dreams for the future. This is writing at its peak. I love it.

Thank you for your reading and nice comment, @kei2. I invite you to read the lyrics of the song What a Wonderful World. Surely you have heard it a lot because it is one of the most beautiful songs in the world. Its author is my little character. When you read them you will see that I do not have so much merit, all the merit is the character's. My writing is a way of thanking him for his life.

What a Wonderful World
I see trees of green, red roses too
I see them bloom for me and you
And I think to myself: What a wonderful world

I see skies of blue and clouds of white
The bright blessed days, the dark sacred night
And I think to myself: What a wonderful world

The colors of the rainbow, so pretty in the sky
Are also on the faces of people going by
I see friends shaking hands, saying: How do you do?
They're really saying: I love you!

I hear babies crying, I watch them grow
They'll learn much more, than I'll never know
And I think to myself: What a wonderful world
Yes, I think to myself: What a wonderful world

What a wonderful world it is. It is one of my favorite songs too. You weaved the words so skillfully I couldn't have recognized them. Still, it was all you. You breathe life into those words.

What a lovely and lyrical story, @gracielaacevedo. I am so heartened by this young man who looks forward to the new day, even though he lives in impoverished conditions.

I enjoy reading about this imaginary world, as seen from the child. It's difficult to see the world in that way because as we grow up, we tend to lose our sense of wonder, especially when difficult situations arise. The child doesn't seem to lose that sense of wonder in spite of the challenging life he lives. His imagination seems to make it more bearable. Well done!