Like @pregosauce mentioned, I thought the idea of water as a silent witness was interesting. I also thought the variability of the form, like the number and length of lines, was a good thematic tie to the subject matter -- both poetry and water can vary in how they flow.
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You’re totally right, I didn’t even see it along those lines. The idea of varying number of lines in each verses just felt right.
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