I can’t quite pinpoint what it is that like about this so much. I feel like I might now what you’re trying to say with it, but as soon as I think that, I feel more than sure that I have no idea what this poem is about.

But it has great flow and rhythm and voice, and I feel like I’m being taken on a ride when I read it, and that is something that I think a poem should do. Take you on a ride. Give you an experience. Make you feel something and the drop you off somewhere you hadn’t intended to go.