This opening chapter draws us right into the mystery surrounding Bolx and Aidan’s disappearance. The hints of a lost memory and a strange awakening give the story a wonderfully disorienting feel that makes us question everything. I love how you use small details, like the dimming light and bloodshot eyes, to set the tone and build curiosity. Can’t wait to see how this intertwines with Fell Dragon and what twists the time corridors will bring. Looking forward to the next chapter and more of that time-traveling intrigue!