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RE: A Year On From The Outbreak: A Retrospective of Poetry on HIVE in the Early Days of the Pandemic [Plus, Win HIVE!]

in Writing Club • 4 years ago

@vicperezdelara I love your poem, especially this

I'm writing this to let you know
how everything has been at home
so you know and don't forget.

Those lines draw all the mundane and holy events in your poem together, bring in the passage of time and hope for continuation of the mundane/holy. Very very nice.

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     4 years ago  

    @riverflows maybe you spelled that poet's name incorrectly.

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       4 years ago (edited) 

      Wouldn't suprise me lol. Isn't it a gorgeous poem? HOpe you can join in on this one.