Really interesting piece! There were some things I didn't completely see in my mind, like Esha sliding on the snow, but I've never even seen real snow! So perhaps you can slide on it?
I like the way you narrate. I think it could work for the most surreal stories. Keep up the good work!
See you around at discord!
Sometimes ice is below the snow. So yeah maybe the word "ice" would've helped.
Esha sprints forward and slides across the ice covered sidewalk.
Cheers @steemedchitty thanks for your input and compliments!