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RE: Writing Prompts (Week 2) - Swiped Right [Short Story]

in #fiction • 6 years ago

The ending was hilarious. I really didn't see it coming and I was already feeling so sorry for Zoe.😀

Now, I can't believe that Brad went through all of that in order to get someone, no, a lady to watch anime with him. He is totally crazy and super funny too, I would say. Ah, I can't imagine the look on Zoe's face, reluctantly watching the anime.

I love the funny twist of this story. Your story draws someone in, gets their attention and then surprise them. You are such an incredible writer.

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Thank you for reading and the lovely compliments @audreybits

I contemplated that ending quite a bit and it just seemed the right fit as far as something a bit unexpected and fun :)