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RE: Drama that dreamt itself into being (original poetry)

in #dsound7 years ago

Bravo sire. You're always on point. Choosing the right words always.

I love this especially. I think I'll love to add a little line. Don't laugh buddy

"We see faces that fade into the smoke of the grave.
We see tears that trace their pathway down a muddy slope
To fall into a river that flows into the sea."

We see our hope faded into thin air
Stealing our believe like a daylight thief
And our morale mashed like a swamp.

We get to our dreams stay invisible
Like it stayed behind a smokescreen
Making us a dreamer no more.

There's much to life
a shadow of many phases
leading us to a place of no hope of return.

@d-pend, life gets better only with more of you who speaks art. I salute your attention to people's comment. It's a rare feat.

Would you write something on humanity soon? I hope to see it