Thank you @d-pend. Congratulations you did use a lot of one syllable words today. When I first read or listen to your poem I just like the way it sounds. A couple words grab me but after reading two or three times I get the point. There are so many forms of poetry and the form of d-pend is free with multi stanzas first catching a reader and then confusing, humiliating, pushing us to despair and then ending up shining hope and light.

• I never know how to end a poem but your poems always end strong. I am always tempted to quote the last line in the poem in my quote but it is so obvious this is what stands out:

The tale does not end:
The world is an unwritten epic.
The protagonist is thought itself:
Thought, whose conception is the world.

• Brother you do a great job of catching the thoughts. This may have something to do with your daily meditation.

The more words I write the more words I erase. And don't worry about the comments too much. I am happy to make the comment and be part of the poem. That is satisfying in itself.