The Night Life That Makes My Heart Longing And Keep Trying

in #artzone7 years ago (edited)

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hi friends steemit friends, on this occasion I want to write a poem that touches the reader

Saturated me
hear
Sweetness of love
Better be alone

Not once
I tried hard
But I was no more

Maybe this fate
The hand of my hand
Must be steadfast through

Far away already
Down my life
A question mark

Sometimes the heart hesitates
Determine my attitude
No place to complain

Only faith in the chest
That makes me capable
Always steadfast through

Thank you for my friends who have taken a little time to read my post today
Greetings From @amisteem

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interesting poem

Nice poem! I liked this bit the most: Not once, I tried hard, But I was no more" and this "Slalu steadfast through" i didn't understand. What's a 'slalu'? Can you eat that? :D

yes sorry write wrong, it means not "slalu" but "always" @madevi

grin Maybe you should edit that? :D

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I often say the world is made of love, and while I still don't understand exactly why, this poem takes me to that place. Thank you for sharing.

You are welcome @foxon