SOUND REALLY SOUND

shrill from the soul
a heart that may have hardened to stone

sound real sound
from dark caves

squeaky voice
echoed
in the chest space

SUARAKAN SEBENAR-BENAR SUARA

lengking dari jiwa
hati yang mungkin telah mengeras batu

suarakan sebenar-benar suara
dari gua-gua gelap

lengking suara
bergema-gema
di dalam ruang dada

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I loved this so much. 😁

Every line si potent with duplicit meaning. Def feel like a haiku from ancient Japan of something. 🙂

Thank you @grocko
I like to use nature metaphor

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