That would be a bit messy though, wouldn’t it
Considering that the interlocutors have just annihilated the crew of a ship, one has to think twice about their perspective. This story is a great commentary on war, violence and our concepts of legal and illegal war. The social commentary here elevates the story above the dialogue (which is excellent) and arc (also excellent). Good stories should be more than the sum of words and actions. Good stories should have some significance. This one does.
Great job. Have you engaged with other members of the community?
Thank you!
Thank you so much for your kind words and detailed response. It means a lot to me as a new writer exploring his voice.