Hi @marbrym. I loved your story.

The descriptions were delightful to make the reading enjoyable.

I would like you to think the following:

She had huge eyes but they were sad.

She had huge, sad eyes.

Your descriptive and narrative work is very sensory. I think the sentence written this way is more in keeping with your text.

Forgive my prank in proposing that change. It's just a suggestion.

It has been a great pleasure to read you!