haha I used the name Brianne for my main character - so close to Briannah 😆 Great minds think alike. This story has excellent dialogue with so much imagination. I can see the contrast of the characters while they're talking on the phone. I like how you show the moral of the story through Briannah's actions during the wedding. Also, the way you briefly mention the German Shephard and hazel eyes in the beginning, then bring it back up toward the end to shock the reader into thinking that maybe Olivia and Jade are with the same guy. Great job! ˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶