The cage
Never really got those wings I wanted
Never really thought you truly care
I am longing for a thing
that might not exist...
I am sad and restless
while you don't want
to quit your side
of the story.
That's probably
a cage...
A cage for me,
A cage for you.
No other
place
to rest...
No chance
for being...
I identify a lot with your writing, sometimes we feel trapped in our own existential emptiness, very cool writing, greetings =)
Thank You very much. I am glad that it speaks to you...although not a state to stay in it for too much, it might help us on other sides...I guess
That is a very dark poem right there.
Very claustrophobic.
lol, great...haha
Was that what you were writing about?
metaphorical speaking...yes.
Like the cell we are all in
Binding us inside
Within the confines
Of ourselves, locked in.
If both the party are sure to quit, they shouldn't hesitate. If both the party are in confusion, nothing can ever be better. Or so, I feel.
Confusion mixing things...yeah...only that the real drama I guess it comes when one wants to desperately stay whereas the other wants to leave (confused or not...)
Yeah. Truly, but I guess then the realization hits too that all this while one felt burdened but the other loved.
A very strong cage when one doesn't learn to ignore some certain things but I guess is a cage one can break free from, because we always have the choice of leaving. Nice poem 😊
One can break free, true!! But it is more difficult when being ''in the middle of the story''. Glad you liked it. Thanks! 🙂
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