The emotions are not coordinated
She lost herself on the road to self discovery
Self doubt ruined her confidence
Influenced by what others said and what she has seen
She felt let down by the system designed to help
Little did she know that a lot of people are fueled by greed
She was hoping on everyone being like she is
But we are all different - shapes by various experiences
She's holding strong despite the uncertainties
Running through life regardless with her skateboard
With no guarantee that she might not fall en route
Life is about risks just like the skateboard - just master your movements
She is pushing through the holes and raging wind
Hoping to fine herself a home where bread isn't stone
A place of comfort where she can be at peace with herself
A break, away from the madness going on in the world
Cheers.
Gingered Up! ❣️
Running through life regardless with her skateboard
With no guarantee that she might not fall en route
Life is about risks just like the skateboard - just master your movements
This part speaks about how terrific life's journey is but how unrelenting the soul is to move on despite the challenges.
Thats right, Balikis95. I am glad you understood the deep meaning behind it. Thank you
You are always welcome dear friend.
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Great simile and metaphor
!PIZZA
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Hola @gingerup un gusto leer tu publicación. Me agrada tu poema es muy sentido con emociones a flor de piel. Es cierto como lo presentas en tus versos sueltos, la incertidumbre puede condicionar y generar multiplicidad e infinidad de sensaciones, sentimientos y afectos, pero lamentablemente la mayoria de las veces son de origen negativo temores y preocupaciones. Es por ello que debemos asimilar y comprender, liberar y fluir.
Feliz semana para tí.
Assimilate and understand, release and flow - I love your choice of words. You described it well. Thank you. Gracias, amigo.