Their Loss, Their Gain

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Their Loss, Their Gain

The laptop screen showed an email sent pop-up.
The kidnappers waited impatiently drinking and talking while the kids sat oblivious on bunk beds. Papa bear was talking about “rules for all” on TV.
“Will they pay?” the woman asked.
The man looked like he’d got rabies.
“They moon shadowed it.”

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This was my entry to @mariannewest and @latino.romano’s 5-Minute Daily Freewrite: Weekend Single Prompt Option: ALL PROMPTS. You can see the details here.

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    This is so neat utilizing all the six prompts. I like the story and how the prompts fit with in.

    Thanks for sharing.

    !ALIVE

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      @hlezama! You Are Alive so I just staked 0.1 $ALIVE to your account on behalf of @justclickindiva. (3/10)

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         last year  

        Thank you, @justclickindiva for stopping by. This one took me longer than usual. It was tempting to go over 50 words.

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          ¡Wow! Excelente inserción de las indicaciones en en una ficción tan comprimida como gráfica. ¡Buen trabajo, mi amigo!

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             last year  

            Gracias, @zeleiracordero-2
            I really like to do this. I have even started to use this free write exercise on one of my English courses. It has been wonderful so far. I plan to post about it soon.
            Hope things are going well in your life.