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RE: The Last Emotion

in #fiction6 years ago

Awesome; I am really glad you enjoyed it. I really worked hard on this one for quite a long time; even one honest appreciation makes it all worthwhile.

Too bad they took the Earth with them too not just humans.

Nah. Humans had taken the Earth with them already. Consumed it to make more space for themselves. Raped its resources to stock store shelves with row after row of meaningless mass-produced rubbish, all the same.

The last trees were in designated arboretums visited only by the elderly to relive their youth. The rest was fucking concrete. The Earth crawled with us disgusting parasitic things. And no matter how any one individual desired it, thanks to human nature we would never, ever stop hurting each other.

Until now.

Their evil master plan was to be the last human?

I am not so sure their goal was so selfish as that. Even if it was, what's so evil about it? Hmm? What is evil anyway?

Here is what I know. Thanks to Neil and Sedna, there will be no war. No poverty or hunger. No homelessness. No murder. No cancer or dementia. No heartbreak. Never, ever will there be another ounce of suffering.

And the last thing that was ever felt, anywhere, by anyone, was their love for each other.