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RE: SteemShort #1 - collaborative story project

in #adsactly7 years ago (edited)

Hi @adsactly here is my entry.

A fictional story about a little boy named John, John's lost his mother during his birth and his father just died, so John was left alone in this world,had no more family, but he always had a dream of a lovely princess. John set out into the world all alone he was left with just 50rands as his inheritance and a pair of silver that was all he had to venture into the world, little John went out into the world he was alone, finally he met a traveling companion, who could marvel wonderfully John got a smarter travelling partner that finally helped him meet the princess in his dreams, and his travelling champion promised to help John win the heart of the princess, this is a task which no one had ever been able to accomplish. Will the travelling champion marvel his way into the princesse's heart??

@phunke

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Bravo cant wait to hear how John got it faired out. I will go with Yes as the answer. But get me updated when the complete story drops @phunke

@phunke, you came at second place in term of upvotes, after @tolustx, another Nigerian.

You should try again for the middle part of this SteemShort, or for the first part of one of the next SteemShorts.

this 50rands part is getting me more curios as to why???

Hi @vcelier please kindly confirm if this is considered a valid entry

Thank you for your valid summary.

Nice story line will love to read this story

Wow interesting story @phunke maybe you should try writing the full one on your next post so that l'll read it in full. i really love stories like this just keep it up👏👏


I know for sure that the traveling champion will definately marvel his way into the princess's heart because John's dream has been to meet a princess and the best way to help John actualize his dream is to have the princess.This is an amazing story @phunke

I look forward to reading the full gist.

Regards @maintain4real-eu